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更新时间：2024-12-15 08:00:03 人气： 作者：珍珍 纠错/删除

1. In china,the customs are quite different from west countries.

embracing

* the customs 泛指这类人，而且是第一次提到，不加 the；

* west countries 改为 the western （西方的）countries，带有方位词的名词必须加 the。

2. Chinese like drinking tea but not coffee.People like eat rice or noodles.

润色：Chinese people like drinking tea more than coffee and prefer rice or noodles to bread with milk.

3. In some special days,like Chinese New Year,people often eat dumplings.

* days 前用介词 on —— 改为：on some special days；

* like Chinese New Year——改为：for example the Spring Festival, Chinese New Year；

4. If it is the first time someone meets Chinese people ,the custom of greeting is shaking hands.

Chinese people 前是 someone ， 后面最好也用 单数呼应，改为：a Chinese people

5. In China, shaking hands is often used in formal situation.

6. Embracing is another greeting custom, it is often used with relatives,friends and other fermilar people.

本句由两个句只组成，应考虑连接，有两种改法：

* 用 and 并列；

* 用更为书面化的非限制性定语从句：Embracing is another greeting custom, which is often used with relatives,friends and other fermilar people.

7. Chinese people do not like kiss when they greeting.

* like kiss 改为 like to kiss each other;

* when they greeting 分词不可直接用作谓语动词，可改为：when they greet 或 when greating （省略主语和助动词）

8. So their are many difference between China and west countries

so 改为 in one word 或 all in all 更带有总结性。

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